【2022新高考I卷英语】读后续写 讲评与范文
【原题呈现】
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It was the day of the big cross-country run. Students from seven different primary schools in and around the small town were warming up and walking the route(路线)through thick evergreen forest. I looked around and finally spotted David, who was standing by himself off to the side by a fence. He was small for ten years old. His usual big toothy smile was absent today. I walked over and asked him why he wasn’t with the other children. He hesitated and then said he had decided not to run.What was wrong? He had worked so hard for this event! I quickly searched the crowd for the school’s coach and asked him what had happened. “I was afraid that kids from other schools would laugh at him,” he explained uncomfortably. “I gave him the choice to run or not, and let him decide.” Ibit back my frustration(懊恼).I knew the coach meant well— he thought he was doing the right thing. After making sure that David could run if he wanted, I turned to find him coming towards me,his small body rocking from side to side as he swung his feetforward. David had a brain disease which prevented him from walking or running like other children, but at school his classmates thought of him as a regular kid. He always participated to the best of his ability in whatever they were doing. That was why none of the children thought it unusual that David had decided to join the cross-country team. It just took him longer — that’s all. David had not missed a single practice, and although he always finished his run long after the other children, he did always finish. As a special education teacher at the school, I was familiar with the challenges David faced and was proud of his strongdetermination.We sat down next to each other, but David wouldn’t look at me.I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners.
【试题分析】
文章语言易懂，情节简单，学生不用担心写跑偏。
根据原文及所给两段首句，不难构思两段内容。
【我的思路】
第一段：我开导David,然后David重燃参加比赛的欲望。
第二段：开始跑，David虽然跑得慢，但他一直坚持，大家没有嘲笑他，而是鼓励他，最终，他成功跑完全程，我们抱在一起，然后是我最惯用的感叹句结尾。
【我的下水作文】
第一段：
We sat down next to each other, but David wouldn’t look at me.It was I who broke the silence first. “David, I think it’s not reasonable to quit right now. Do you remember the days when you spent so much time and effort in practicing?”It seemed that my words worked. He lost himself in thought and then turned to me. “Yes, you’re right. What I should focus on is myself not others’views.”He replied. Meanwhile, the run was going to start soon. David took a deep breath and stood up.
第二段：
I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners.Then with the whistle blowing, the run began. Although David couldn’t run as fast as others, he kept a steady speed. Five minutes later, there was a long distance between David and other runners. However, looking at his body rocking from side to side, no one laughed at him. Instead, kids along the road clapped their hands to encourage David. Finally, with strong determination, he reached the finish line. I went over to hughim and everyone present gave him a thumbs-up. How great to see his big toothy smile again!
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