2022年哈尔滨市道里区中考三模英语作文讲解(含参考范文)

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六、书面表达(本题共20分)


假如你是中学生李平,你看到学校英文网站上征稿的通知,你想对如何做健康的中学生发表你的想法。请依据如下要求完成给编辑的稿件。


写作要点:

1. 表达参加此活动的心情。

2. 述说同学的健康状况:

(1)大部分同学很健康;

(2)有的同学经常生病,甚至抑郁(suffer from depression);

3. 针对如何做一名健康的中学生谈谈自己的想法。


Dear editors(编辑),

I'm writing to tell you that I have learned the notice. _________

_________________________________________________________________

_________________________________________________________________

Best wishes!

Yours truly,

Li Ping


写作要求:

1. 不得使用真实姓名和学校名。

2. 可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯。

3. 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。

4. 至少80词。





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(以下范文是王老师亲自写的,转载请注明出处)

书面表达参考答案

Dear editors(编辑),

I'm writing to tell you that I have learned the notice.I feel very interested in this topic, so I am going to say something about it. As for my classmates, most of them are healthy. However, some classmates are always sick, or even suffer from depression. Thus, we can see the seriousness of this issue.

As the saying goes, a sound mind comes from a sound body. Without health, how could we make progress in our study? Therefore, here comes an important question: how can we keep fit? As far as I am concerned, the following two suggestions are worth considering. First, we need exercise regularly. Simple exercise like taking daily walks, playing badminton or even riding bikes are all great ways to keep us healthy. Indeed, regular exercise can reduce the risk of heart disease and release pressure. Second, sufficient social interaction is another thing that we can do. As we all know, staying socially active can greatly reduce depression and isolation. For example, we can hang out with friends or have long conversations with parents. All of these things will improve our mental health.

So much for my personal understanding.

Best wishes!

Yours truly,

Li Ping




讲评部分




如何做一个快乐的中学生,健康的中学生,开心的中学生,合格的中学生,优秀的中学生等等这些话题都是超级常规常见的话题,也是我们学生应该重点练习的题目。所以,本次的作文题目是“健康的中学生”,不难。


如果不想写那么高级,简单来说写“饮食平衡”、“多锻炼”等等就可以了。同样,还是那句话:简单的题目,一定要重视衔接连贯和语法准确性。




扩展资源




2020年哈尔滨中考英语作文“考前押题”(附:近4年考试题目)


中考英语作文备考:“表达建议”该咋写?总结这些,你都拿走吧!


中考英语作文备考:“谈论好处”的表达大全,不仅正确,而且还高级!


2021年哈尔滨中考英语作文王老师原创备考题目1


2021年哈尔滨中考英语作文王老师原创备考题目2


2021年哈尔滨中考英语作文王老师原创备考话题345


写作素材:

  • A Healthy Diet

    Your diet is one of the most important parts of having a healthy body.Eating a variety of fruits and vegetables along with enough proteins and whole grains is the key to a healthy diet.

  • Regular Exercise

    Like eating a healthy diet, participating in regular exercise is crucial to keeping your body healthy.Regular physical activity helps control your weight, strengthens your bones and muscles, improves your mood and overall mental health and may add extra years to your life.

  • Get Enough Sleep

    Although the amount of sleep needed varies with each individual, getting adequate, quality sleep plays a vital role not only in your daily performance, but also in keeping your body healthy throughout your life.

  • Cut Out The Bad Habits

    We’ve heard it before, ‘we are creatures of habit’ and ‘old habits die hard.’ However, when it comes to bad habits that jeopardize our health, there are serious reasons why we should ‘kick the habit.’Whether its smoking, alcohol, drugs, or eating junk food, there are proven methods to help you make a positive change.

  • Meaningful Relationships

    We shouldn’t overlook our emotional well-being and how it impacts our overall health. Indeed, our emotions and how we feel towards essential people in our lives can contribute significantly to our feelings of validation and happiness.

  • Social Interaction

    A circle of friends and acquaintances can provide the social stimulus necessary for us to feel connected and integrated into our local community and environment. Recreational groups, senior communities, and clubs can provide a source of fun as well as keep us busy, active and happy.

  • Having A Purpose Or Passion

    Volunteering is a meaningful way to integrate social activity while helping others. Whether you volunteer through a national non-profit organization, local charity group, hospital, church, library or even a grandchild’s school, it doesn’t matter how big or small your role. In fact, there are many types of volunteering jobs available and you can find the right volunteer role through various sources.

  • Having a balanced diet

    Eat a well-balanced, low-fat diet with lots of fruits, vegetables and whole grains. Choose a diet that's low in saturated fat and cholesterol, and moderate in sugar, salt and total fat.When you eat right, you not only feel better and have more energy, but you also provide your body with vital nutrients -- protein, carbohydrate, fat, vitamins, minerals and fiber -- that maintain your body's health.

  • Drink Water

    Keeping well-hydrated is essential not only to your body's health, but to its survival. Water is an essential nutrient that makes up between 60 and 70 percent of your body. Every cell in your body needs water to function properly. Water maintains body temperature, moves nutrients and waste materials through your body, helps normalize blood pressure and lubricates and cushions body joints and organs.

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作者:王兴刚老师(gongzhong号|头条号|抖音号:王老师英语教学),英语教师,从事教学16年。本号日常推文主要包括:初高中英语知识的梳理和剖析,中高考英语考点的讲解与总结。推文主要面向中高考学生,每日分享学生们能够实实在在用得到的英语知识,特别适合双减后能够独立学习的初高中生!

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