Write at least 60 words on the topic "My progress" (以“我进步了”为题,写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格)
你在生活或学习中一定取得过不少进步,比如生活技能的获得、学习方法的掌握、良好习慣的养成。请选取其中一个方面,结合自身经历,谈一谈你是如何取得这一进步的。
The following is for reference only(以下表达仅供参考)
used to do/be…
try my best to do…
make progress in( doing)…
四步骤:
审体裁:记叙文
审人称:第一人称
审时态:一般过去时+一般现在时
这是最重要的一步,很多学生往往在这一步卡住,不知道写什么,没有内容,不知道如何突出“进步”这一主题。
我们知道记叙文有六要素:时间、地点、人物、起因、经过、结果。难点在于怎么把起因、经过描述出来。
无论是小说还是电视剧,都是通过跌宕起伏的情节表达主题、突出中心,从而吸引观众。那么记叙文如何“跌宕起伏”呢?先来看一篇经典的新概念文章。
该文通过对比表达出“最好的艺术评论家”这一主题。如果说这是一种横向比较,那么我们的中考作文则更倾向于纵向比较,即描述经历时,通过突出一个人的前后不同,表达中心。
比如“我进步了”,可通过描述前后变化的经过表明进步这一事实;比如“常怀希望”,可通过描述自己从遇到困难、失去希望到最后克服困难,表达出无论何时、何境,都会有希望,从而呼应“常怀希望”这一观点;比如“难忘的事情”,可通过自己在某一方面的变化,或者外界的行为给思想上带来的的冲击等表达出“难忘”。
所以记叙文写作思路可以归结为三点:
困难-经过-转变
have difficulty doing sth
造句:
我考试不及格。
I failed the exam.
我的英语比较差。
I was weak/poor in English.
我在交际困难。
I had difficulty in getting along with my classmates.
Instead of doing sth, ...
gave sb. generous praise for sth.
encourage sb./offer useful suggestions
学习类:make mistakes, choose, watch, learn, practice, speak, receive, listen to, read, write, work hard, answer, finish, perform, solve...
活动类:climb, visit, set off, give up, reach, attract, express, take action, help, upset, enjoy, find, fall down, hurt, give sb. a hand, stick to, cross, cheer up...
造句:
我的老师鼓励我并且给了我很多有用的建议。
My teacher encouraged me and offered me useful suggestions.
我不仅课上认真听讲,而且课下也对了很多书籍。
I not only listened carefully in class but also read a lot of books in my spare time.
他总会因为我的一点小进步表扬我。
He always gave me praise for any minor progress of me.
get improved/make progress
其他常见词组:
get to the top, find the way up, understand, show, develop, create, make it, defeat, win, complete,get on well with...
造句:
我现在得到了更高的分数。
I get higher grades.
我更加擅长于英语口语。
I do much better in spoken English.
我在英语写作上取得了很大的进步。
I made a lot of progress in English writting.
正向感受:relaxed, pleased, surprised, amazed, warm, confident, soft, enegetic, wonderful, gemtle, hearted, proud, determined, hopeful...
负向感受:nervous, angry, worried, upset, frustrated, tired, sleepy, frightened, scared, fearful, afraid, hopeless, disappointed...
记叙文的写作逻辑是按照时间顺序,那么常见的时间连接词有first, then, next, at once, the moment, finally...
My Progress
l've made a lot of progress in English.
(困难)
Soon after I started middle school, I was weak in English, especially in reading and writing, whichmade me depressed and frustrated. (感受)
(经过)
Knowing my problems, my teacher encouragedme and gave me some advice.Then I began to work hard on it. I not only listened more carefully in class but also read a lot of books in my spare time. What's more, I often wrote articles and shared them with my teachers and classmates.
(转变)
Now I get higher grades and gain a sense of achievement. I'm pleased with my progress and thankful to my teacher.(感受)