英语下水作文

发布于:2022/7/10 12:01:01   所属分类:高考备战学习资料库



中考英语下水作文









Hello, everyone! Last weekend, we went to a beautiful beach to celebrate our graduation with our teachers. In the afternoon, we had great fun playing volleyball on the beach. We also tried a new and daring sport—surfing. Although most of us were surfing for the first time, some showed a great talent for it.

When the sun set, we started to put up tents with joint efforts. Then, we had a great feast. I could see that everyone had put tremendous effort into preparing this meal. To contribute to environmental protection, we cleaned up the beach voluntarily without our teachers' guidance.

Sitting in a circle, we could hear the soft murmur of the waves rolling on the beach. The quiet atmosphere made us eager to share our stories and feelings. The sharing party brought us a lot of laughter and happiness. Many of us were also moved to tears when hearing the parting words.

This activity marks the end of our junior school life. Though we have to bid farewell to one another, the bond of friendship forged between us will never disappear. Thanks to the Internet, I can share our experience with you in this vlog.



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