高考热点话题英文写作范文与解析

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高考,对于很多人而言是人生的一次转折点。而对于每一位高中学生来说,写作的重要性都毋容置疑。

本文给大家汇总了数篇各地高三联考英文写作范文与解析,希望能够对大家的写作复习备考起到一定的参考作用!


一


(唐山市一模)征文活动

你校英文报正在举办以“认识自我,完善自我”为主题的英语征文活动,请你给校报投稿,内容包括:

1. 你的优点:

2. 你的不足:

3. 如何完善。

注意:

1. 词数80左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

【答案】Possible Version

We all have our strengths and weaknesses. I am no exception. I am warm-hearted, which makes me well received. Plus, determination and patience are the qualities I am proud to have, so I think I can overcome any challenges life might throw at me.

However, I am a little bit careless, which creates embarrassing moments or disappointing performance. To better myself, I shall make check lists and to-do lists. In this way I can concentrate better.

Hopefully, I can be betterthan I have ever been.

【解析】

【导语】

本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“认识自我,完善自我”为主题,谈谈自己的优缺点,以及自我完善的措施。

【详解】

1.词汇积累

长处,优势:strength→advantage

缺点:weakness→ disadvantage

克服:overcome→conquer

集中注意力:concentrate→ focus

2.句式拓展

句式转化

原句: Plus, determination and patience are the qualities I am proud to have, so I think I can overcome any challenges life might throw at me.

拓展句:What’s more, it is determination and patience that are the qualities I am proud to have, so I think I can overcome whatever challenges life might throw at me.

【点睛】

【高分句型1】Plus, determination and patience are the qualities I am proud to have, so I think I can overcome any challenges life might throw at me.(运用了省略关系代词的限制性定语从句,省略连接词that的宾语从句)

【高分句型2】However, I am a little bit careless, which creates embarrassing moments or disappointing performance.(运用了which引导非限定性定语从句)



二


(北京市丰台区一模)推荐信

假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,你校来自英因的交换生Jim发邮件请你推荐一门学校特色课程:请你用英文给他回复邮件,内容包括:

1.你推荐的课程;

2.你的理由。

注意:1.词数100左右;

2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数,

【答案】

Dear Jim,

How is it going? I’m writing to recommend a distinctive course to you — Chinese Kungfu.

This course is perfect for you. First, it is great for your overall health. Chinese Kungfu involves a lot of body movements, which can make you stronger and more flexible. It can also reduce your stress and keep you in a relaxed mood. What’s more, the course is interactive. During the training, you can get positive feedback and learn how to cooperate with others. I’m sure you can benefit a lot from it.

Are you ready to give it a go? Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生向来自英因的交换生Jim发邮件推荐一门学校特色课程。

【详解】

1.词汇积累

推荐:recommend→suggest/advise

此外:besides → what’s more

包括:involve→include

合作:cooperate with→ deal with/get along well with

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句:During the training, you can get positive feedback and learn how to cooperate with others.

拓展句:When you are training, you can get positive feedback and learn how you can cooperate with others.

【点睛】

【高分句型1】Chinese Kungfu involves a lot of body movements, which can make you stronger and more flexible.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)

【高分句型2】 I’m sure you can benefit a lot from it.(运用了省略that的宾语从句)





三


(张家口市一模)邀请信

假定你是李华,你的美术老师Ms. Zhou将举办在线讲座,介绍四幅中国名画和中国画的创作技巧。请给你的英国朋友Thomas写一封邮件,邀请他观看,内容包括:

1. 讲座内容;

2. 邀请理由;

3. 时间和观看方式。

注意:

1. 写作词数应为80左右;

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

【答案】One possible version:

Dear Thomas,

How’s everything going? Ms. Zhou, my art teacher, is going to present an online lecture about Chinese painting. As I know you’re always keen on traditional Chinese art, I’m writing to invite you to watch it.

The lecture will cover the background of four famous Chinese paintings and some basic techniques in Chinese painting. The lecture is due on March 25, from 9:00 a.m. to 11:00 a.m. If you would like to watch it, log onto the website of my school at that time. You are bound to learn a lot from it.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

【导语】

本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给英国朋友Thomas写封邮件,邀请他观看你的美术老师Ms. Zhou将举办的介绍四幅中国名画和中国画的创作技巧的在线讲座。

【详解】

1. 词汇积累

涉及:cover→involve

著名的:famous→well-known

技巧:technique→skill

一定:be bound to→be sure to

2. 句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句:Ms. Zhou, my art teacher, is going to present an online lecture about Chinese painting.

拓展句:Ms. Zhou, who is my art teacher, is going to present an online lecture about Chinese painting.

【点睛】

[高分句型1]As I know you’re always keen on traditional Chinese art, I’m writing to invite you to(运用了as引导的原因状语从句和that引导的宾语从句,省略了that)

[高分句型2]If you would like to watch it, log onto the website of my school at that time.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句)




四


(齐齐哈尔市一模)报道

你校最近举办了春季运动会,请你为校英文报写一篇报道。内容包括:

1. 时间和地点;

2. 运动会的基本情况;

3. 比赛的意义。

注意:1. 词数100左右;

2. 短文题目已为你写好。

【答案】One possible version:

The Spring Sports Meet

To raise our awareness of physical health and enrich our school life, our school held the annual spring sports meet on the playground last Thursday and Friday.

The students from every class signed up for the sports meet. They took part in different kinds of events, such as running, the high jump, and tried their best to succeed in their selected sports. Some of them even broke the records of our school.

The sports meet was highly appreciated, because not only did it provide a chance for us to exercise, but also made us more willing to cooperate.

【解析】

【导语】

本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生为校英文报写一篇关于你校最近举办的春季运动会报道。

【详解】

1. 词汇积累

提高:raise→improve

报名:sign up for →apply

参加:take part in →join in

机会:chance →opportunity

2. 句式拓展

简单句变为复合句

原句:To raise our awareness of physical health and enrich our school life, our school held the annual spring sports meet on the playground last Thursday and Friday.

拓展句:In order that our awareness of physical health could be raised and our school life could be enriched, our school held the annual spring sports meet on the playground last Thursday and Friday.

【点睛】

【高分句型1】To raise our awareness of physical health and enrich our school life, our school held the annual spring sports meet on the playground last Thursday and Friday.(运用了不定式作目的状语)

【高分句型2】The sports meet was highly appreciated, because not only did it provide a chance for us to exercise, but also made us more willing to cooperate.(运用了because引导的原因状语从句)




五


(湖南省联考一模)邀请信

假定你是李华,校读书俱乐部负责人。俱乐部将在下周三下午三点在报告厅进行英语朗读比赛(recitation contest)。请你给外教Tom写一份电子邮件。内容如下:

1. 邀请他担任比赛评委;

2. 问他届时是否有空出席;

3. 请他向学生推荐合适的文学作品。

注意:

1. 词数80左右。

2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

【答案】

Dear Mr. Tom,

I’m writing to invite you to be present at the recitation contest organized by the reading club at three next Wednesday afternoon in the lecture hall. If available then, could you do us the favor? And we would appreciate having you as a judge. By the way, It would be very nice if you can recommend some classic English literary works suitable for us students. Thanks for considering our request.

I’m looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience!

Yours Sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

这是一篇提纲类作文。考生给外教Tom写一份电子邮件,邀请外教Tom1邀请他担任比赛评委并请他向学生推荐合适的文学作品。

【详解】

1. 词汇积累

参加:join/participate in→ be present

帮助某人:assist sb in doing→ do us the favor

有空的:free→ available

考虑:take...into consideration→ consider

2. 句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句:It would be very nice if you can recommend some classic English literary works suitable for us students.

拓展句:It would be very nice if you can recommend some classic English literary works which are suitable for us students.

【点睛】

【高分句型1】“I’m writing to invite you to be present at the recitation contest organized by the reading club at three next Wednesday afternoon in the lecture hall.”运用了非谓语动词做定语。

【高分句型2】If available then, could you do us the favor? 运用了if引导的状语从句的省略。



六


(沈阳市一模)告知信/通知

假定你是校学生会主席李华,为了帮助英国交换生更好地了解中国文化,培养本国学生的文化意识,学生会将举办一个“中国文化日”活动,请你根据以下提示,用英语写一则通知,内容包括:

1. 活动的目的;

2. 活动的时间、地点、内容、对象等;

3. 期待加入。

注意:1. 写作词数为80左右;2. 可适当增加内容以使行文连贯。

【答案】

Notice

In order to make the exchange students have a better understanding of Chinese culture and develop everyone’s cultural awareness, the Students’ Union will organize a Chinese Culture Festival on the afternoon of October 9th, which will be held in the school hall. Here are some relevant details about it.

To begin with, various activities will be arranged to experience traditional Chinese culture, such as paper cutting, kung fu and Chinese calligraphy. What’s more, you will be welcome to enjoy the Peking Opera performed by our students.

Wish you would like the activities and join us.

The Students’ Union

【解析】

【导语】

这是一篇应用文。要求考生写一则英语通知,告知学校交换生“中国文化日”活动的相关内容。

【详解】

1.词汇积累

培养:cultivate→develop

相关的:related→relevant

各种各样的:a variety of→various

此外:in addition→what’s more

2.句型拓展

简单句变复合句

原句:To begin with, various activities will be arranged to experience traditional Chinese culture, such as paper cutting, kung fu and Chinese calligraphy.

拓展句:To begin with, various activities, which includes paper cutting, kung fu and Chinese calligraphy, will be arranged to experience traditional Chinese culture.

【点睛】

[高分句型1]In order to make the exchange students have a better understanding of Chinese culture and develop everyone’s cultural awareness, the Students’ Union will organize a Chinese Culture Festival on the afternoon of October 9th, which will be held in the school hall. Here are some relevant details about it.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)

[高分句型2]Wish you would like the activities and join us.(运用了宾语从句,省略了引导词that)



七


(辽宁省实验中学一模)告知信/通知

假定你是希望中学的高三学生李华,你的英国朋友Tom来信询问你打算如何度过高考录取后至上大学前的这段时间。请给Tom回信告诉他你的想法。内容包括:

1.上大学前的准备;

2.业余生活;

注意:1.词数80左右,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

2.书信开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

【答案】One possible version:

Dear Tom,

How is everything going with you?I am now going all out for the final Examination yet to come in early June. But I am also thinking about how to spend the post-Gaokao time. Well, first, I will help with some housework and neighbourhood voluntary work if any. As for the new life ahead, getting familiar with my majors should be the biggest part of my plan so that I can adjust myself to the new academic requirements. I will pursue two new hobbies and travelling included. In short, I will get ready both mentally and physically before college life begins.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

【导语】

本篇书面表达属于一篇应用文。要求学生代替李华给英国朋友写信,向他介绍你高考录取后至上大学期间这段时间的安排。

【详解】

1.词汇积累:

考虑:think about→consider/think over

关于,至于:as for→in regard to/with respect to

适应:adjust oneself to→adapt oneself to/acclimatize oneself to

总之:in short→in a word/in brief

2.句式拓展:

同义句转换

原句:I will pursue two new hobbies and travelling included.

拓展句:I will pursue two new hobbies, including travelling.

【点睛】

[高分句型1]

But I am also thinking about how to spend the post-Gaokao time.(使用了疑问词+to do作宾语。)

[高分句型2]

As for the new life ahead, getting familiar with my majors should be the biggest part of my plan so that I can adjust myself to the new academic requirements.(使用了so that引导结果状语从句。)



八


(辽宁省重点中学一模)开放性作文

在学习生活中,同学之间的相处是十分重要的。请你以“How I Get Along With My Classmates”为题,向英语校刊投稿,内容包括:

1. 阐述与同学相处的重要性;2. 谈谈你与同学的相处方式。

注意:

1. 写作词数应为80左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯;

3. 短文题目已为你写好,不计入总词数。

【答案】One possible version:

How I Get Along With My Classmates

In our daily study and life, it is our classmates that keep us company, so we should attach great significance to the relationship with other classmates. Here is how I get along with my classmates.

Firstly, I think it important to understand each other. Consequently, whenever something unhappy happens among us, I’ll be in others’ shoes. Besides, I always spare no effort to help my classmates if they need help. Moreover, I enjoy activities which can promote relations with other classmates.

In short, getting along with classmates is important.

【解析】

【导语】

本篇书面表达属于说明文,要求考生向英语校刊投稿,内容包括:1. 阐述与同学相处的重要性;2. 谈谈你与同学的相处方式。

【详解】

1. 词汇积累

重要性:significance→importance

重要的:important→vital

因此:consequently→hence

此外:besides→moreover

2. 句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句:In short, getting along with classmates is important.

拓展句:In short, it is important that we should get along with classmates.

【点睛】

[高分句型1]Consequently, whenever something unhappy happens among us, I’ll be in others’ shoes.(运用了whenever引导的时间状语从句)

[高分句型2]Moreover, I enjoy activities which can promote relations with other classmates.(运用了which引导的定语从句)



九


(包头市一模)开放性作文

在紧张而又忙碌的备考复习中,很多同学因为缺乏自信而焦虑、紧张。请你联系实际,围绕自信这一话题写一篇短文,给校英语报投稿,内容包括:

1. 自信的意义;

2. 如何培养自信(如多参加劳动、体育运动等)。

注意:1. 词数100左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯

【答案】

Recently, lacking in self-confidence, many students are becoming anxious and nervous during the stressful and busy preparation for the exam review. So it’s high time that we should build up our self-confidence.

When we are faced with new challenges, we may feel nervous and be not sure whether we can make it. But we must have confidence, because only when we have it can we have the belief that we can achieve our dream. It’s more than important that we build up our self-confidence if we don’t have it. For example, we can take part in more physical labor or some sports. They can make us full of energy and have a high spirit. On that condition, we’ll say goodbye to inferiority and be confident.

【解析】

【导语】

本文是应用文。在紧张而又忙碌的备考复习中,很多同学因为缺乏自信而焦虑、紧张。请你联系实际,围绕自信这一话题写一篇短文,给校英语报投稿。

【详解】

1.词汇积累

缺少:be lacking in→be short of

面对:be faced with→face

成功:make it→do sth. successfully

实现梦想:achieve our dream→realize our dream

在那种情况下:on that condition→in that case

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句:For example, we can take part in more physical labor or some sports. They can make us full of energy and have a high spirit.

拓展句:For example, we can take part in more physical labor or some sports, which can make us full of energy and have a high spirit.

【点睛】

【高分句型1】So it’s high time that we should build up our self-confidence.(由it’s high time that引导的虚拟语气结构)

【高分句型2】When we are faced with new challenges, we may feel nervous and be not sure whether we can make it.(when引导的时间状语从句和whether引导的宾语从句)



十


(山西省一模)图表作文

你校高三英文社团就“What is the most effective way to ease stress?”话题进行了一次调查,请根据下面调查结果写一篇调查报告,内容包括:

1. 简述调查结果;

2. 分析原因。

注意:

1. 词数100左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

【答案】

According to the pie chart, students have a variety of ways to ease their stress.

As is shown in the chart, about 40% of students choose to listen to music, while 25% of them prefer to do physical exercise to make them relaxed. Meanwhile, 18% of students tend to surf the Internert as their recreation ways when facing the hardship in the study. By comparison, there are nearly 12% , who are fond of talking to friends and 5% choose other activities to help relieve stress.

From my point of view, the reason why the majority of students accounting for almost 65% in the diagram choose more positive way is that they focus much on their health.Students clearly concentrate on building a well-developed body so that they make progress in their study.

【解析】

【导语】

这是一篇应用文。要求考生依据提供的饼图,对调查报告做以说明并解释形成原因。

【详解】

1.词汇积累

许多:a variety of|→a number of

同时:meanwhile→ at the same time

喜欢:be fond of→be keen on

几乎:nearly→almost

2.句式拓展

句式转换

原句:Students clearly concentrate on building a well-developed body so that they make progress in their study.

转换句:Students clearly concentrate on building a well-developed body to help them make progress in their study.

【点睛】

[高分句型1]

Meanwhile, 18% of students tend to surf the Internert as their recreation ways when facing the hardship in the study. (运用了状语从句的省略)

[高分句型2]

By comparison, there are nearly 12% , who are fond of talking to friends and 5% choose other activities to help relieve stress.(运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句)




十一


(天津市重点中学一模)感谢信/祝贺信

假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津,收到了正在学中文的外国朋友Chris送给你的马克吐温写的一本书The Adventures of Tom Sawyer(汤姆索亚历险记),作为回赠,你想送一本能体现中国文化的书,请给Chris写封电子邮件,内容包括:

要点:

1.对他表达感谢和对这本书的喜欢;

2. 简单介绍你赠送的这本书;

3. 希望他了解中国文化。

注意:

1.词数不少于100;

2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

【答案】

Dear Chris,

Having got the book you sent me, I can’t help writing this email to express my gratitude to you. This book, The Adventures of Tom Sawyer, written by Mark Twain, enjoys great popularity around the world. Not only does it help me improve my English but also inspires me a lot.

I know your Chinese has improved a lot these days. I will send you a book, the name of which is History as Mirror. After reading this book, I think you will know more about Chinese history and be a Chinese expert. In my opinion, to learn a language is to learn its culture. As you know, Chinese culture is profound, which makes learning Chinese a tough job. Wish you great progress in Chinese study.

Best wishes and keep in touch!

Yours,

Li Jin

【解析】

【导语】

本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给外国朋友James写封邮件,表达对朋友所赠之书的喜欢,以及回赠给朋友书的简单介绍。

【详解】

1.词汇积累

表达:convey→express

感激:appreciation→gratitude

了解更多:have a better understanding of→konw more about

在我看来:as far as I am concerned→in my opinion

2.句型拓展

同义句

原句:I will send you a book, the name of which is History as Mirror.

拓展句:I will send you a book, called History as Mirror.

【点睛】

[高分句型1]Having got the book you sent me, I can’t help writing this email to express my gratitude to you. (运用了现在分词作状语)

[高分句型2]Not only does it help me improve my English but also inspires me a lot.(运用了部分倒装)

[高分句型3]I will send you a book, the name of which is History as Mirror. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)



十二


(苏州高新区一模)倡议书

46.随着手机及其他电子设备的普及,“低头族”到处可见,大街上,公交车上……,以年轻人为主,针对这一问题,请写一篇倡议书,呼吁人们尽量抬起头来……

注意:1. 行文连贯流畅; 2. 参考词汇:低头族:phubber 3. 词数:80词左右

【答案】

The mobile phone and other electric devices have been part of our life, bringing us much convenience. However, more and more phubbers, especially young people, can be seen everywhere, who never care about what happens around.

Obviously, while people are riding on a bus, crossing the street, or lying on the bed, etc., phubbing can be harmful to their physical health, their eyes in particular. Therefore, I call on everyone to pay more attention to this and hold your heads up to enjoy your surroundings.

【解析】

【分析】

本篇书面表达是提纲类作文,要求写一篇倡议书。

【详解】

第1步:根据提示可知,本文要求写一篇倡议书:随着手机及其他电子设备的普及,“低头族”到处可见,大街上,公交车上……,以年轻人为主,针对这一问题,请写一篇倡议书,呼吁人们尽量抬起头来……,时态应为一般现在时。

第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),如; phubber(低头族),electric devices(电子设备),convenience(方便),especially(特别是),everywhere(到处),obviously(明显地)及harmful(有害的)等。

第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持卷面的整洁美观。

本文内容完整,层次分明,结构紧凑,表达准确。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。

【点睛】

范文语言地道,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式,高级词汇有be part of(成为……的一部分),care about(关心),be harmful to (对……有害),in particular(尤其),call on(号召)以及pay more attention to(),而且还使用了非限定性定语从句“However, more and more phubbers, especially young people, can be seen everywhere, who never care about what happens around.”,时间状语从句“while people are riding on a bus, crossing the street, or lying on the bed, etc., phubbing can be harmful to their physical health, their eyes in particular.”,非谓语动词“The mobile phone and other electric devices have been part of our life, bringing us much convenience.”及“Therefore, I call on everyone to pay more attention to this and hold your heads up to enjoy your surroundings.”,全文没有语法错误,上下句转换自然流畅。



十三


(烟台市、德州市一模)告知信/通知

假定你是李华,收到美国好友Peter发来的邮件。他称赞中国举办的冬奥会,表示非常喜欢吉祥物冰墩墩,并询问冬奥会对你的影响。请你写一封回信,内容包括:

1.表达感谢;

2.许诺寄去冰墩墩;

3.冬奥会对你的影响。

注意:

1.写作词数应为80左右;

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

参考词汇:吉祥物 mascot冰墩墩 Bing Dwen Dwen

【答案】

Dear Peter,

I greatly appreciate your attention and high praise for the Winter Olympics held in China.

Knowing you’re very fond of the cute mascot Bing Dwen Dwen, I’m happy to inform you I have managed to get one, which I promise will reach you soon.

The Winter Olympics have deeply struck me. The advanced technology and unique culture presented at the opening ceremony have strengthened my national pride. Absorbed in ice and snow events for days, I’ve fallen in love with skiing and keep practicing it whenever possible. Furthermore, the athletes’ competitive spirit will always inspire me to meet future challenges.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

【导语】

本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给美国好友Peter写封信,内容包括:1.表达感谢;2.许诺寄去冰墩墩;3.冬奥会对你的影响。

【详解】

1. 词汇积累

高兴的:happy→delighted

告知:inform→notify

增强:strengthen→intensify

此外:furthermore→moreover

2. 句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句:The advanced technology and unique culture presented at the opening ceremony have strengthened my national pride.

拓展句:The advanced technology and unique culture which were presented at the opening ceremony have strengthened my national pride.

【点睛】

[高分句型1]Knowing you’re very fond of the cute mascot Bing Dwen Dwen, I’m happy to inform you I have managed to get one, which I promise will reach you soon.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)

[高分句型2]Absorbed in ice and snow events for days, I’ve fallen in love with skiing and keep practicing it whenever possible.(运用了过去分词作状语)



十四


(重庆市礼嘉中学一模)回复信

46.假设你是李华,你在美国夏令营时的住家Johns夫妇写信告诉你他们下周将来宁波游玩,请按下列要点给他们写一封回信。

1)表示欢迎;

2)告知他们下周的大致安排;

3)希望告知航班信息以便接机。

注意:

1)词数:80 左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入字数);

2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯

【答案】

Dear Mr. and Mrs. Johns,

I'm glad to know that you are coming to Hangzhou next week. It's a great opportunity for me to repay your help and hospitality when I was in America.

For your stay in Hangzhou, I'll arrange for you to visit some of the most famous places of interest here, like West Lake, Lei Feng Tower. Meanwhile, I'll also take you to taste some of the delicious local food. I bet you'll have a most enjoyable week.

Would you please tell me some information about your flight so that I can pick you up at the airport? Looking forward to seeing you again.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

【分析】

本篇书面表达是应用文,要求写一封书信。

【详解】

第1步:根据提示可知,假设你是李华,你在美国夏令营时的住家Johns夫妇写信告诉你他们下周将来宁波游玩,请按下列要点给他们写一封回信。1)表示欢迎;2)告知他们下周的大致安排;3)希望告知航班信息以便接机。

第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组):opportunity (机会);repay(报答);hospitality(款待);arrange for(安排);Meanwhile(同时);the delicious local food(美味的当地食物);bet(敢说);enjoyable(快乐的);information(信息);pick sb up(接某人)等。

第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般将来时。

第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【点睛】

范文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如I'm glad to know that you are coming to Hangzhou next week.运用宾语从句;Would you please tell me some information about your flight so that I can pick you up at the airport?运用目的状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。


【总结】

学习之路,从不会一帆风顺

但是成功,藏在每一次倔犟中。

所以不要抱怨,更不要放弃

因为人生的路,每一步都算数。



编辑:郑婉璐

审核:李 哲

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