预测03 学生安全

对于每个人来说，生命只有一次。注意安全，就是珍惜生命的一种有效途径。每年因意外事故伤亡的中学生有很多，为了让自己健康平安成长，我们该如何保护自己的人身安全呢？

【预测题目】

话题作文：

（一）

你校要出一期主题为“How Can We Protect Ourselves?”的英文校刊。假如你是该报的小记者，请以“How Can We Protect Ourselves?”为题，写一篇英语文章，倡导青少年进行自我保护，并列举生活中青少年自我保护的具体措施，内容可以涉及交通安全、交友安全、食品安全、遇险报警等。

要求：1. 至少包含以上的两个要点，可添加其他方面的安全事例；

2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息；

3. 词数：110词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：food safety, traffic rules, call the police

How Can We Protect Ourselves?

As teenagers, it’s important to protect ourselves.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】例文：

How Can We Protect Ourselves?

As teenagers, it’s important to protect ourselves. But how can we protect ourselves? Here are some suggestions.

Firstly, we should obey the traffic rules when we go out. Secondly, we should avoid hurting ourselves when doing exercises and never swim in the river without permission. Thirdly, we should be careful to make friends and stay away from those who are dangerous. Moreover, it’s important for us to keep food safety in mind and we had better eat three meals at home. Last but not least, we should keep calm when we are in danger, and then we can call the police or ask teachers or parents for help.

In a word, safety comes first. So we need to learn how to protect ourselves and stay away from danger.

【解析】

【详解】

1. 题干解读：本题要求以“How Can We Protect Ourselves?”为题写一篇英语文章，内容包括：倡导青少年进行自我保护并列举一些自我保护的具体措施。

2. 写作指导：本文主要以第一人称进行写作，时态主要采用一般现在时；写作时应承接开头，紧扣提示内容进行写作；列举措施时可使用连接词（如Firstly，Secondly等），这样使得文章条理清晰，内容紧凑；写作内容应至少涉及“交通安全、交友安全、食品安全、遇险报警”中的两个要点，还可以在此基础上自我发挥以丰富文章内容和达成字数要求；写作完成后应确保文章内容齐全，行文流畅，语言符合规范和英文表达习惯。

（二）

在日常生活中，人们会遇到各种安全问题，例如饮食、交通、防疫或校园欺凌（bully v.）等问题。但有些同学不知道如何进行自我保护。基于此，为了提高同学们的自我保护意识，请以“Self Protection”为题， 用英语写一篇短文。

内容包括:

1.结合生活实际，谈谈自我保护的重要性。

2.列举生活中的安全问题（至少两个方面），并分别提出合理化建议。

写作要求：

1.语言流畅，层次清晰，可以适当发挥。

2.词数100词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；书写规范，卷面整洁。

3.文中不能出现考生本人的学校名称和姓名。

Self Protection

These days, people pay more attention to safety problems. ________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

In short, self protection is important to us. Wish everyone a safe life!

【答案】例文：

Self Protection

These days, people pay more attention to safety problems.

As students, we have to go to school every weekday. On the way to school we need go across the road sometimes. If we are not careful enough, we may be hit by a car. So we have to learn to protect ourselves.

But how can we protect ourselves? First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially online. Second, don’t cross the street when the lights are red. Also, we should eat healthily and safely. These three suggestions are good for us to protect ourselves. We should adopt these suggestions to protect ourselves.

In short, self protection is important to us. Wish everyone a safe life!

【解析】

【详解】

1.题干解读：该题目属于议论文写作。在写作时应根据题目要求结合生活实际讲述自我保护的重要性，讲述自我保护的一些建议。

2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称为主，讲述自我保护的重要性及自我保护的一些建议，要叙述完整，条理清晰。

（三）

越来越多汽车进入我们的家庭，改善了我们的生活，但同时也带来了很多问题，如塞车和车祸。作为中学生，我们应该怎样做呢？请你以 How to travel safely? 为题写一篇交通安全的短文。

要点如下：

1. 遵守交通规则，如走人行道/过斑马线。

2. 别在街道上或马路上玩耍和踢球。

3. 劝父母不能酒后驾车。

4. 个人观点：……。

要求：

1. 词数110词左右；

2. 要点提示均须涉及，可适当增加内容；

3. 字迹工整，卷面整洁，文意连贯，语言流畅；

4. 不用真实姓名、校名、地名。

参考词语：come into, heavy traffic, accident, follow, sidewalk 人行道, zebra-crossing 斑马线, drink.

How to travel safely?

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【答案】例文：

How to travel safely?

With more and more cars coming into our families, we are happy that it has greatly improved our life. But unluckily, it has also brought many problems, such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents.

Traffic safety is everybody’s business. We must follow the rules. For example, we must walk on sidewalks, when we cross zebra–crossing, stop and look right and left, and then go across fast. Don’t play football on the road. We can tell our parents not to drink before they drive, not to run through red lights, not to talk and laugh while driving etc.

We can say cars are coming into our life, but only when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybody’s business can we be safe driving on roads and walking on sidewalks.

【解析】

【详解】

题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文，根据所给提示，围绕交通安全，以How to travel safely?为题写一篇短文。

写作指导：时态用一般现在时；人称用第一人称。写作时可采用三段式，首先介绍道路上车辆越来越多带来的问题，引出本文的话题——交通安全；然后具体介绍一些交通安全的措施；最后提出了自己的希望。注意保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。

（四）

近来，青少年学生的安全备受社会。在全国中小学安全教育宣传日来临之际,当地报社请你以“How to Keep Us Safe？”为题，写一篇英语短文，谈一谈青少年学生应该如何保障自身的安全。

提示:

(1) What should you do at home?

(2) What should you do on the way to school?

(3) What should you do at school?

要求:

(1)短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。

(2)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。

(3)词数：80左右。(短文开头已给出，不计人总词数)

How to Keep Us Safe?

Safety is important to us all. As teenagers, we must learn to protect ourselves.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】例文

How to Keep Us Safe?

Safety is important to us all. As teenagers, we must learn to protect ourselves. When we are at home, we should be careful when we use electricity. Before answering the door, we first see whether she/he is a stranger. On the way to school, we must pay special attention to the traffic and obey the rules in the street. We must always ride the bicycles on the right and stop when the lights are red. When we are at school, we never run around the hallway. It’s no good for us to fight with each other over small matter.

【详解】

1. 题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。要求根据题目中所给提示问题写一篇文章。首先认真审题，看清提示问题，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及可能用到的表达。然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。

2. 写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称，时态使用一般现在时。在写作过程中，注意句与句之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列等连词，使文章过渡平稳、自然流畅。最后检查是否有拼写、语法结构错误，以及词数是否符合要求等。

材料作文：

（一）

安全对于每个人来说都很重要。作为中学生，我们可能遇到哪些安全问题？该怎样处理呢？请根据以下要点提示，以How to Keep Safe 为题，写一篇英文短文。

写作要求： 1. 结构完整，要点齐全，可适当拓展；

2. 表达通顺，语言规范，书写清晰；

3. 词数不少于80。

How to Keep Safe

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【答案】范文

How to Keep Safe

Hello, everyone. Safety is very important for us. We should learn to protect ourselves. Here are some suggestions about how to keep safe.

Firstly, we must follow the traffic rules. Secondly, we should pay attention to the food safety. Be sure not to eat too much junk food. Thirdly, when we go upstairs or downstairs, we should keep to the right. Be careful while doing sports. Remember not to swim in the river alone. What’s more, we’d better not make friends online. We must stay away from dangerous people around. If we get into trouble, we must keep calm and safe first and then call the police, the teachers or parents for help.

In a word, as students, we must always keep safety in mind and value our lives.

【解析】

【详解】

1.题干解读：该题目是命题作文。在写作时应符合文章主题；第一段写保持安全的重要性；第二段主要写如何保护好自己的安全；第三段要发出呼吁或表明态度。

2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述；时态采用一般现在时为主；描述细节时，细节应符合文章要求，不可随意减少，可以有适当的补充；描述时应注意逻辑，保证思路清晰。

（二）

今年安全教育日的主题是“普及安全知识，确保生命安全”。为了进一步增强中学生的安全意识，提高自我保护能力，学校将举行以安全为主题的征文活动。请你根据下列表格内容写一篇题为“How can we make ourselves safe?”的英语短文。

要点：

1. 饮食安全：不吃变质食物，少吃或不吃垃圾食品；

2. 交友安全：网上慎重交友，不和陌生人交谈；

3. 自行补充。

要求：

1. 80词以上，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数：

2. 条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确；

3. 文中不得使用真实的校名与姓名。

提示词汇：go bad（变质）

As teenagers, to learn how to make ourselves safe is especially important. ____________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】范文：

How can we make ourselves safe?

As teenagers, to learn how to make ourselves safe is especially important. Here are some of my suggestions.

First, we are supposed to be careful when making friends online, which may bring us unnecessary troubles. Second, remember never to go swimming on our own in the river or lake because doing that will probably put ourselves into dangerous situations. Besides, in order to eat healthily and safely, we’d better eat less junk food and not eat food that goes bad, for they will do harm to our health. At last, when traveling outside, take care of our personal things and call the police for help in time if we are in danger.

In short, safety must come first!

【详解】

题干解读：题目要求以“How can we make ourselves safe?”为题写一篇英语短文；要求包含所有提示要点，并进行适当发挥。

写作指导：此作文时态宜用一般现在时，采用第一人称口吻。此作文可采用3段落格式，第一段：开门见山，引出下文；第二段：从交友安全、饮食安全、旅行安全等方面提出建议；第三段：总结全文。

（三）

建设平安校园是我们每个人的责任与义务。作为一名学生，我们更应该珍惜生命，注意人身安全。假如你是 Li Hua，请你就安全问题，向全校学生发出倡议，写一封100词左右的安全倡议书。

内容提示：

1、不带管制刀具到学校；

2、不私自下河洗澡；

3、不打架；

4、上学放学的途中应该注意安全；

5、遇紧急情况，立即报告警察或老师。

参考词汇：管制刀具：restricted knives or things；洗澡：have a bath；打架：fight；紧急情况：emergency；交通安全：pay attention to the traffic。

Dear students,

___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】例文：

Dear students,

As we know, safety is the most important thing in our lives. So, we should try our best to make sure we are safe. We mustn’t bring restricted knives or things to our school because these things may cause serious problems. Do not have a bath in rivers or ponds by ourselves without our parents’ permission. And we should be friendly to others, so fighting is strongly banned. Make sure that we should always pay attention to the traffic on our way to school or home. Furthermore, if we meet some emergency, we must call the police or our teachers for help. In a word, following these safety rules above can make us live in peace.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

【详解】

1.题干解读：题目要求根据提示内容写一篇安全倡议书，写作时，开头点题，中间将所给要点结合参考词汇翻译齐全，并适当添加细节，结尾总结。

2.写作指导：本文应用第一人称来提出倡议，时态采用一般现在时；提出倡议时，内容连贯，条理清晰，适当使用逻辑词，注意灵活变换句式和使用的情态动词，避免单一重复。

（四）

“无锡市安全教育平台”让广大中小学生学到了许多安全知识。假如你是Jack，你的英国朋友Simon 想了解平台的相关内容，请你根据下表提示用英语写一篇短文，从提供的六个类别里选两个，跟Simon谈谈相应的保护自身安全的措施，并分享你的体会。

提示词汇：Accidental injuries 意外伤害；treasure珍爱

Dear Simon,Safety is very important. Our government especially pays attention to teenage safety. A website called”wuxi.safetree.com” helps us gain a lot of knowledge of safety. On the website, I have learned a lot. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】例文：

First of all, let me tell you something about fire safety. When our building is on fire, we should get out as soon as possible. We should use a wet towel to cover our mouths and noses to protect ourselves from thick smoke. And we should also stay low to the ground. Never go back into the building on fire.

Second, it’s very important for us to protect ourselves from traffic accidents. We should always follow traffic rules. When we cross the road, we should look left, right and then left. Moreover, it’s dangerous to sit, walk or ride a bicycle on railway. We should walk or ride on the right of the road.

In my opinion, as students, we should treasure life. We need to guard against any possible danger around us. So we must pay attention to safety any time.

【解析】

【分析】

【详解】

1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，给出多个安全事项，选取两个介绍，分析需合理。

2. 写作指导：本文用到的一般现在时态，人称用第一人称。文章开头已给出，写作时，注意承接上文，写作中注意表达观点时的常用句式，注意在表达不同观点时，连词的使用。内容上应注意描述的全面性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。

（五）

对于每个人来说，生命只有一次。注意安全，就是珍惜生命的一种有效途径。每年因意外事故伤亡的中学生有很多，为了让自己健康平安成长，你该如何保护自己的人身安全呢？请根据下表提示，以“How to Keep Safe”为题，写一篇英语短文。

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】例文

How to Keep Safe

Safety is very important for us. We should learn to protect ourselves. Here are some suggestions about how to keep safe.

Firstly, we must follow the traffic rules. Secondly, we should pay attention to the food safety. Be sure not to eat too much junk food. Thirdly, when we go upstairs or downstairs, we should keep to the right. Be careful while doing sports. Remember not to swim in the river alone. What’s more, we’d better not make friends online. We must stay away from dangerous people around. If we get into trouble, we must keep calm and safe first and then call the police, the teachers or parents for help.

In a word, as students, we must always keep safety in mind and value our lives.

【解析】

【详解】

1.题干解读：这是一篇材料作文，要求以“How to Keep Safe”为题，根据表格中的要点提示，从校园安全、生命安全、网上安全和交通安全四方面，写一篇短文，谈谈如何保证自己的人身安全。注意要点齐全。

2.写作指导：题干中写作要点已给出，可根据所给的要点提示列出写作过程中需要的短语和句型，短文用第一人称和一般现在时来行文，可使用“Firstly”、“Secondly”、“Thirdly”、“What’s more”等词，使文章条理清晰，写作过程中，注意提建议的句型的交替使用。保证无单词和语法错误。

发言稿：

近年来全国校园暴力事件频频发生，为了提高青少年的自我防范意识和保护能力，某中学初三1班围绕校园暴力问题召开主题班会。假定你是班长李华， 以How to protect ourselves in school violence(暴力)为标题写一篇发言稿，主要包括如下内容：

1.校园暴力事件已引起广泛。

2.要求每个学生都学习相关知识，增强自身保护能力。

3.遇到校园暴力时要采取适当措施，包括：保持冷静，注意自己身边的环境、可能存在的危险；尽一切可能避免人身伤害；及时报警。

4.请求大家团结起来和邪恶作斗争，校园会变得更美好。

写作要求：

1.表达清楚，语法正确，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

2. 80字左右（短文开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；

3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。

参考词汇：

draw one’s attention; have influence; enhance(增强); self-protection; keep an eye out for; protect...from; try one’s best; fight against; evil(恶行)

How to protect ourselves in school violence

Dear friends,

During these years, some seriously violent incidents happened in school, resulting in very bad results.

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That’s all. Thank you!

【答案】参考例文

How to protect ourselves in school violence

Dear friends,

During these years, some seriously violent incidents happened in school, resulting in very bad results. The incidents of campus violence have drawn widespread attention in our country.

As a student, we should learn some knowledge about how to deal with the violence and enhance the ability of self-protection. Of course, if we meet the violence, we should take appropriate measures to protect ourselves. First, we’d better keep calm, judge the situation and be aware of the possible dangers. Then, we should try our best to escape or prevent the violence. Last but not least, we should call the police or teachers as soon as possible to avoid physical injury.

I hope everyone will unite to fight against evil and the campus will become better.

That’s all. Thank you!

【解析】

【详解】

1.题干解读：本文是一篇发言稿，根据所给信息对于校园暴力问题进行发言。

2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时为主；人称以第一人称为主。写作时不要遗漏所给的要点，要求表达清楚，语法正确，无单词错误，语句通顺，逻辑清晰。可适当的增加细节使行文连贯。