近六年（2016-2021）年高考英语书面表达（应用文）考查情况一览表阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. Father’s appearing was like a savior to the two children. Under the guidance of their father, they took positive actions and started all over again. They made the bread and then went on cooking porridge. Father helped them adjust the fire, which was the key to success. It was all right this time. Delicious breakfast was ready. How happy they were!The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. When their mother saw the delicious and perfect breakfast in front of her, she was very surprised. It was not only the gift, but the love of the children for her that moved her very much. The two children could finish cooking a breakfast, which she didn’t expect. The children said loudly, “Happy Mother’s Day!” Mother hugged them tightly and kissed them again and again.【分析】本文以母亲节为线索展开，讲述了双胞胎Jenna和Jeff为了献给母亲一份美味的早餐，自己动手，做起饭餐来，但是不幸的是，他们连连失败，后来在父亲的帮助下，获得成功，他们把早餐献给亲爱的母亲，妈妈非常感动的故事。①由第一段首句内容“当双胞胎失望地环顾四周时，他们的父亲出现了。”可知，第一段可描写他们的父亲指导帮助他们准备早餐。②由第二段首句内容“这对双胞胎把早餐端到楼上，叫醒了他们的母亲。”可知，第二段可描写母亲收到孩子们的礼物早餐，非常感动。2.续写线索：帮助——指导——积极——献礼——感动3.词汇激活行为类①帮助：help/assist②.指导：guide/conduct③.献礼：present a gift/give a gift情绪类①.积极：positive/positively/take positive actions②.感动：moved/touched【点睛】[高分句型1]. Father helped them adjust the fire, which was the key to success. (which引导的非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2]. It was not only the breakfast, but the love of the children for her that moved her very much. (使用not only…but (also)句型及强调句型)________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________When I brought my paycheck home--it was$119--my dad wanted to talk to me.Knowing that he would talk about my earnings, I pulled a long face and intended to simply walk past him and slip back to my bedroom. “Come here, son.”Dadexclaimed, wearing an accessible expression. My heart sank. What I had been looking forward to—a dreamy new football outfit would finally give way tofamilyexpenses. Reluctantly, I inched forward and submitted the paycheck. However,Dad slid the paycheck back into my hand, saying in a tender voice, “You'vegrown up. You have every right to decide what to do with the money.”I was surprised that my dad allowed me to use the money as I wished.My previous desperation was immediately erased by great bills. I stepped closer and hugged him tightly. Just at that moment I noticed his grey hair and stiff neck. Memories of his usual cry of pain on the neck came crowding in. Irealizedhow much he had contributed to the family through histiringworkof being a trucker. Tears began to blur my vision, “Dad, thanks for your hard work these years. I shouldn’t have been so selfish and not willing to contribute my money.” On that day, I began to understand Dad’s world and it seemed that he was also on the way into my world.1.段落续写①由第一段首句内容“拿到119美元的工资了，父亲却有话说。”可知，第一段可描写作者的工资到手后，父亲想用这笔钱，得知消息后，作者的情绪变化。经过和爸爸意味深长的谈话后，虽然作者仍有想要的东西，“迫于压力”，却还是把钱交给了父亲.②由第二段首句内容“父亲竟然让我自己决定如何支配这份工资。”可知，第二段主要描述作者内心活动以及最终的决定，突出孩子长大后，对父亲和家人多了一份理解。2.续写线索高兴——不情愿——惊讶——开心--发现--主动贡献①不情愿的：unwilling/surprised/happy/willing②自豪地：understanding and thankful阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。One fall,my wifeElliand I had a single goalphotographpolar bears. We were staying at a research camp outside “the polar bear capital of the world”—the town of Churchill in Manitoba,Canada.Takingpicturesof polar bears is amazing but also dangerous. Polar bears—like all wild animals—should be photographed from asafedistance. When I’m face to face with a polar bear,I like it to be through acamerawith a telephoto lens. But sometimes,that is easier said than done. This was one of those times.As Elli and I cooked dinner,a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed,and smelled our garlicbread.The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp,which was surrounded by a high wirefence. He pulled and bit the wire. He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts.Terrified,Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew. We yelled at the bear,hit pots hard,and fired blank shotgun shells into the air. Sometimes loudnoiseslike these will scare bears off. Not this polar bear though—he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive pawsIradioed the camp manager for help. He told me a helicopter was on its way,but it would be 30 minutes before it arrived. Making the best of this close encounter,I took some pictures of the bear.Elli and I feared the fence wouldn’t last through 30 more minutes of the bear’s punishment. The camp manager suggested I use pepperspray. The spray burns the bears’eyes,but doesn’t hurt them. So I approached our uninvited guest slowly and,through the fence,sprayed him in the face. With an angry roar,the bearranto the lake to wash his eyes.2.3.4.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp. Roars and screams pierced the silence with needle-like shrillness. ThenoisesturnedElliand I pale with horror. I feared that the giant would destroy our wholefence. He roared repeatedly, shattering what was left of the silence. Elli seized this opportunity to take somepicturesof the bear. The animal’s noises echoed all around us. We betrayed our feelings by huddling together, shivering with fear. After thoroughly scrutinizing the area, he trotted forward a few steps. At that very moment, the helicopter arrived. My heart leaped with joy as I knew we were likely to be saved. Elli used peppersprayagain to buy us enough time. But this time the bear became more alert. He regarded us with the merciless necessity of hunger, so we throw all the food we have. He then turned away and started devouring. As we were climbing the rope ladder, Elli prayed like thousand times to show thankfulness of beingsafeand sound.A few minutes later,the bear headed back to our camp.Roars and screams pierced the silence with needle-like shrillness. ThenoisesturnedElliand I pale with horror. I feared that the giant would destroy our wholefence.He roared repeatedly, shatteringwhat was left of the silence. Elli seized this opportunity to take somepicturesof the bear. The animal’s noises echoed all around us. We betrayed our feelings by huddlingtogether, shivering with fear. After thoroughly scrutinizingthe area, he trottedforward a few steps.At that very moment,the helicopter arrived.My heart leaped with joy as I knew we werelikely to be saved. Elliused peppersprayagain to buy us enough time. But this time the bear became more alert.Heregardedus with the merciless necessity of hunger, so we throw all the food we have. He then turned away and started devouring. As we were climbing the rope ladder, Elli prayed like a thousand times to show thankfulness of beingsafeand sound.
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。A vacation with my mother I had an interesting childhood: It was filled with surprise and amusements, all because of my mother-loving, sweet, and yetabsent-mindedandforgetful. One strange familytripwe took when I was eleven tells a lot about her. My two sets of grandparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota, and my parents decided to spend a few weeks driving to those states and seeing all the sights along the way. As the first day of our trip approached,David, my eight-year-old brother,and I unwillingly said good-bye to all of our friends. Who knew if we’d ever see them again? Finally, the moment of our departure arrived, and we loaded suitcases, books, games,campingequipment, and atentinto the car and bravely drove off. We bravely drove off again two hours later after we’d returned home to get the purse and traveler’s checksMomhad forgotten. David and I were always a little nervous when using gas station bathrooms if Mom was driving whileDad’’t about to take any chances. On the fourth or fifth night, we hadtroublefinding a hotel with a vacancy. After driving in vain for some time, Mom suddenly got a great idea: Why didn’t we find a house with a likely-looking backyard and ask if we could set up tent there? David and I became nervous. To our great relief, Dad turned down the idea. Mom never could understand our objections. If a strange family showed upon her front doorsteps, Mom would have been delighted. She thinks everyone in the world asniceas she is. We finally found a vacancy in the next town.The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us.______________________________________________________________________________________We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way.______________________________________________________________________________________ The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us.Thinking of this tent, Mom suggested that we gocampingin the next village in excitement, with her eyes glittering. Considering her enthusiasm, we all agreed. When the door of our car opened, Mom stormed out instantly and urged us to put up thetent. David and I were asked to pick up some branches to build a fire. And when we came back, Dad and Mom had already lain down the grass comfortably in front of the tent, talking merrily with a local boy at our age, who kept glancing at this tent curiously. Soon we learnt that the boy in rags even didn’t have a home to live in. Of course, Mom “forgot” to take this tent with us again. We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way. And we also had anicetime living with my grandparents during thattrip. But what impressed me most was that tent, which was forgotten deliberately by Mom. Though she did love going camping, she presented that poor boy with this tent out of sympathy. It was Mom that made my childhood colorful. And it was also she that showed me the true meaning of giving.阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。“I’m going to miss you so much,Poppy,” said the tall, thin teenager. He bent down to hug his old friend goodbye. He stood up, hugged hisparents, and smiled, trying not to let his emotionsHis parents were not quite able to keep theirs under control. They had driven their son several hours out of town to theuniversitywhere he would soon be living and studying.It was time to say goodbye for now at least. The familyhuggedand smiled through misty eyes and then laughed.The boy lifted the last bag onto his shoulder, and flashed a bright smile. “I guess this is it,” he said. “I’ll see you back home in a month, okay?” His parents nodded, and theywatchedas he walked out of sight into the crowds of hundreds of students and parents. The boy’s mother turned to thedog, “Okay, Poppy, time to go back home.”The house seemed quiet as a tomb without the boy living there. All that week, Poppy didn’t seem interested in her dinner, her favorite toy, or even in her daily walk. Her owners were sad too, but they knew their son would bebackto visit. Poppy didn’t.They offered the dog some of her favorite peanut butter treats. They even let her sit on the sofa, but the old girl just wasn’t her usualcheerfulself. Her owners started to get worried. “What should we do to cheer Poppy up?” asked Dad. “We’ve tried everything.”“I have an idea, but it might be a little crazy,” smiled Mom. “Without anybody left in the house but us, this place could use a bit of fun. Let’s get a little dog for Poppy.”It didn’t take long before they walked through the front door carrying a big box. Poppy welcomed them home as usual but when she saw thebox, she stopped. She put her nose on it. Her tail began wagging____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared.Poppyapproached with caution, trying not to scare the puppy. Sure enough, it was only moments later that the ball of fur lifted its head out of theboxto peek at its new home and its new friend. Mom and Dadwatcheddelightedly as the two made acquaintances. They were glad to see Poppy comingback to her usual self, guiding the littledogon daily walks and even introducing to it her favorite toys. A few weeks later, the boy arrived home from university.Hearing his bags unloaded on the driveway, Poppy’s ears pricked up and suddenly she was on all fours. Theboy was greeted with acheerfulhigh-pitched bark. Then the front door popped open and Poppy darted to his embrace, followed by the little one who licked his fingers fondly. Smiling ever so bright, he called out to hisparents, who tugged him in for a longhug. Despite the chill autumn wind, their home was filled with the warmth of love and reunion.